4 Responses to The Space in Between- Chapter 7

  1. Tim November 30, 2011 at 1:31 pm #

    Here’s a twist cat lovers would enjoy: Have a fluffy dog pull up in a truck. The heroes hitch hike thinking they will be driven home, but the dog, sweet talking them all the way, is actually an agent for the bad guys and drives them straight to the gambling club! How they would get out of this mess though is something else… I guess Santa could go soft and let them escape on his sleigh!

  2. Eva Karakostas November 30, 2011 at 3:47 pm #

    Thank you for the great suggestions Tim, definitely we’ll consider them :D!!! I love that…the ‘evil’ fluffy doggy. Those sound hilarious and would really add a cool twist to the story.

  3. Helen Talia December 1, 2011 at 4:40 am #

    Keep up the good work, Eva and Slewo. . . a hard-earned and heart-felt congratulations!

  4. Nahrain Talia-Khoshaba December 1, 2011 at 3:17 pm #

    Congrats guys…..this is awesome !!!!

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