Great writing. Needs more boom box, though.
How will it end? I can’t take it anymore!!!!
This scene will wrap up next week, then 5 more to end it all.
I think Jonah has aspirations for running for president. Lol.
“I want my happy back, America, and, America, you’re not happy. I don’t want to tell you what you are, but you’re not happy. Not all the way.”
I’m not exactly sure how to take that, so I’m gonna go ahead and just pretend that you were comparing my writing to that of one of the greatest speakers in the world… 🙂
Haha, it wasn’t anything bad. I just thought it would make a good (but funny) speech on the campaign trail.
Your dialogue, as usual, is right on. 🙂
I love the true, conversational dialogue. Very genuine and very well done.
Thanks, Marc. Thank you very much.
Damn that Erin! Just blab blab blab blab, not letting sweet Jonah get a word in.