DEcomPRESSIONism- Chapter 31

Ray Goldfield November 29, 2011 at 12:56 pm #

Great writing. Needs more boom box, though.
- John M. Coker November 29, 2011 at 1:38 pm #
  
  wat
Gary November 29, 2011 at 4:53 pm #

How will it end? I can’t take it anymore!!!!
- John M. Coker November 29, 2011 at 4:57 pm #
  
  This scene will wrap up next week, then 5 more to end it all.
Jason Snyder November 30, 2011 at 9:21 am #

I think Jonah has aspirations for running for president. Lol.

“I want my happy back, America, and, America, you’re not happy. I don’t want to tell you what you are, but you’re not happy. Not all the way.”
- John M. Coker November 30, 2011 at 11:07 am #
  
  I’m not exactly sure how to take that, so I’m gonna go ahead and just pretend that you were comparing my writing to that of one of the greatest speakers in the world…
  - Jason Snyder November 30, 2011 at 1:13 pm #
    
    Haha, it wasn’t anything bad. I just thought it would make a good (but funny) speech on the campaign trail.
    
    Your dialogue, as usual, is right on.
Marc Lombardi November 30, 2011 at 9:39 am #

I love the true, conversational dialogue. Very genuine and very well done.
- John M. Coker November 30, 2011 at 11:08 am #
  
  Thanks, Marc. Thank you very much.
Doug December 2, 2011 at 4:27 pm #

Damn that Erin! Just blab blab blab blab, not letting sweet Jonah get a word in.