FRAGMENTS- Chapter 1

 

by Tim Nakayama and Jay Penn

 

 

 

14 Responses to FRAGMENTS- Chapter 1

  1. Ray Goldfield October 17, 2011 at 11:10 am #

    Very interesting start. Seems to be a futuristic story. Can’t wait to see where it goes next.

  2. Allysons Attic October 17, 2011 at 12:25 pm #

    Looks interesting. Caught my attention already, can’t wait to see what’s next.

  3. Jason Snyder October 17, 2011 at 1:12 pm #

    Very good start. Hard to tell where it’s going, but I’m looking forward to seeing the story unfold.

  4. Henry October 17, 2011 at 2:34 pm #

    It certainly got my interest.

  5. Arion October 17, 2011 at 3:00 pm #

    It looks great. Good work!

  6. ms winters October 17, 2011 at 8:00 pm #

    brilliant art work

  7. Brad Nelson October 18, 2011 at 12:05 am #

    This is a really fun start and the artwork is brilliant. Can’t wait to see more!

  8. Issa October 18, 2011 at 2:29 am #

    Looks good and interesting premise! My only gripe…. I want MORE. And those floatation boots that old man is wearing.

  9. Slewo Oshana October 18, 2011 at 1:58 pm #

    Jeezus, robot horse for the win. Can’t wait to see the next segment.

  10. Christian from Loviatar October 18, 2011 at 8:41 pm #

    I wish I had a robot to ride to school. Nicely done!

  11. Minh Phung October 19, 2011 at 4:48 am #

    LIKED!

  12. Faith October 20, 2011 at 1:21 am #

    Aw, too short!! Looks like a promising story– nice illustrations, too. Bring out the next page already! 🙂

  13. Timothy Nakayama October 24, 2011 at 9:34 am #

    Dear Ray, Allyson, Jason, Henry, Arion, Ms. Winters, Brad, Issa, Slewo, Christian, Minh and Faith,

    Thank you for all the wonderful feedback you’ve given on FRAGMENTS so far. Jay and I are simply over the moon with all the comments we’ve gotten on this first chapter. We hope you’ll like Chapter 2 as well. Thank you!

  14. WA_side October 25, 2011 at 7:15 am #

    Intriguing, plus I like the little robot bird. Are those other things giant goats?

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