by Tim Nakayama and Jay Penn
Very interesting start. Seems to be a futuristic story. Can’t wait to see where it goes next.
Looks interesting. Caught my attention already, can’t wait to see what’s next.
Very good start. Hard to tell where it’s going, but I’m looking forward to seeing the story unfold.
It certainly got my interest.
It looks great. Good work!
brilliant art work
This is a really fun start and the artwork is brilliant. Can’t wait to see more!
Looks good and interesting premise! My only gripe…. I want MORE. And those floatation boots that old man is wearing.
Jeezus, robot horse for the win. Can’t wait to see the next segment.
I wish I had a robot to ride to school. Nicely done!
Aw, too short!! Looks like a promising story– nice illustrations, too. Bring out the next page already! 🙂
Dear Ray, Allyson, Jason, Henry, Arion, Ms. Winters, Brad, Issa, Slewo, Christian, Minh and Faith,
Thank you for all the wonderful feedback you’ve given on FRAGMENTS so far. Jay and I are simply over the moon with all the comments we’ve gotten on this first chapter. We hope you’ll like Chapter 2 as well. Thank you!
Intriguing, plus I like the little robot bird. Are those other things giant goats?