6 Responses to DEcomPRESSIONism- Chapter 24

  1. Ray Goldfield September 13, 2011 at 9:41 pm #

    Another great one. The dialogue really rings true.

    • John M. Coker September 16, 2011 at 12:50 pm #

      Thanks, man. I’ve gotten a lot of good feedback on the dialogue from this installment, specifically the “but my pretty isn’t the point” line. Which is cool, ’cause that line just felt so right to me when writing this.

  2. Arion September 13, 2011 at 11:41 pm #

    Great one, indeed.
    One of these days I’ll try to write dialogues like that. John, do you think you can help me then ?

  3. Gary September 14, 2011 at 6:24 am #

    Solid stuff, as always.

  4. Marc Deschamps September 14, 2011 at 9:41 am #

    I’m really excited to read the ending. Very curious to see how it plays out.

    • John M. Coker September 16, 2011 at 12:51 pm #

      Me too! Wait- what?

      😀

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