by John Coker
Another great one. The dialogue really rings true.
Thanks, man. I’ve gotten a lot of good feedback on the dialogue from this installment, specifically the “but my pretty isn’t the point” line. Which is cool, ’cause that line just felt so right to me when writing this.
Great one, indeed.
One of these days I’ll try to write dialogues like that. John, do you think you can help me then ?
Solid stuff, as always.
I’m really excited to read the ending. Very curious to see how it plays out.
Me too! Wait- what?