4 Responses to DEcomPRESSIONism – Chapter 12

  1. Ray Goldfield June 21, 2011 at 1:16 pm #

    I’ve read storyarcs of major superhero comics that had less words. 😀

    Great story, though. I’ve really gotten into all these characters.

  2. Doug June 21, 2011 at 3:27 pm #

    Once you get Cary going the dude does not shut up.

    Fun dialogue though.

  3. Simon Collins June 21, 2011 at 5:02 pm #

    I love how this has snowballed from a few separate character moments into a much fuller story that we’re still on peeking at. Great job.

    • John M. Coker June 22, 2011 at 7:21 pm #

      Yeah, which to be quite honest, wasn’t actually my intial intent. These really were meant to be little fragments of conversation, nothing more than character moments connected through characters rather than through one singular story or narrative. Character moments and insights into those characters through conversational dialogue, dropping the reader into scenes, letting them evesdrop, and then plucking them out. Giving you ‘story’, but not ‘A story’ But you’re right, it has snowballed into a much fuller story, each little conversation being a separate piece to this overall puzzle, the idea that ever little meaningless conversation or pointless banter, helps to paint the overall picture. Or as the tagline says- the nothing that happens is everything.

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